Board Thread:Season 5 - Switzerland/@comment-4190137-20130525105721

Welcome, Glarus and Ticino to your second Reward Challenge! Andrew was disqualified at the last Tribal Council for self-voting twice.

For today's challenge you are to write the most gruesome fictional story.

There will be criteria:


 * Creativity in the writing: ?/5
 * Spelling/Punctuation/Grammar: ?/5
 * Gruesome features in the story: ?/10
 * Detail: ?/10
 * Plot: ?/20

Here is a story I came up with...

''Once upon a time there was a boy, he was bullied in school for absolute no reason. He was punched, kicked and beaten by bullies each and ever single day.''

''The boy excelled in school fantastically in Year 7, but he had many bad teachers in Year 8 which resulted in his grades going down. When Year 9 came he was a failure. All he had was his bullies. People at school started ignoring him because he was 'annoying' and a 'downer' so this boy was stuck with no friends. When Year 10 came he was all alone, the only friends he had were exchange students from China who could speak barely any English. He continued to fail in his grades, he gave up.''

''At home, his parents were very crazy people. They behaved like 5 year olds and putting up with them was like putting up with hell. After Year 10 this boy dropped out of school. He didn't do Year 11/12 or even TAFE. He just lived in his house doing nothing everyday.''

''On his 18th birthday he committed suicide. By hanging himself on a street lamp. He wrote a suicide note, saying 'those who made my life hell are responsible for my suicidal. One day they will pay'. When the boy was killed hardly anybody cared. His funeral was almost deserted.''

10 years later, his mother died of leukemia, 2 years after that, his father was killed by thugs in the city, 2 years after that his Year 8 Maths teacher choked on a fork, 2 years after that one of his bullies died in a car accident, and as years passed on, his other bullies died.

''But the ironic thing is, the boy who killed himself did nothing to cause these deaths, it was karma that caused those people's deaths. No matter what karma will always find a way to restore the balance.''

Wanna know what you're playing for?

You will get to choose which Ticino members sit out of the Immunity Challenge as well as who gets sent to Exile Mountain!

You have until 11:00 on the 26th of May to submit this challenge! You must submit this as a team, so majority of your tribe must agree on the story for it to be your tribe's submission. Good luck! 