Board Thread:Season 25 - Rome/@comment-4379763-20150309225509

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- Okay, here's my review of the two stories: Norbert: In all honesty, it felt more like reading a summary of a story rather than a story itself. It felt crammed together and I couldn't really understand it. Topaz: I couldn't really tell what style the story was meant to be written in, like a play or normal story. Though the topic was new and interesting. Ultimately I have to say Topaz's story is superior. Horror elements, creativity and character development were all present, and although the grammar was poor in both stories, I have to say Topaz's story had better.

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- Norbert: Your grammar was terrible and the story overall was hard to follow. Honestly, I wasn't a fan. Topaz: Once the grammar was ugh but your story was enjoyable to read so I feel like yours was better in my opinion.

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- I just believe that Topaz's story is more well put together

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