Board Thread:Survivor ORG Wiki Academy/@comment-4190137-20140316104600/@comment-26233531-20160120044603

I noticed this forum and decided to post here. Ironically I notice the person insisting on proper grammar isn't using entirely proper grammar. It's similar to what Jeff uses, and it's good enough that people shouldn't complain, but it's not perfect grammar. For this reason I'll be making a few improvements in my entry. Grade me up or down as you please.


 * Come on in, guys!
 * Daru is taking their first look at the new Zuma tribe - James voted out at the last Tribal Council.
 * For today's challenge, you must build a sandcastle; the team with the best sandcastle wins!
 * You have until 00:00 on January 16th UTC time to complete this challenge!
 * If you forget to vote, you will self-vote.
 * Zuma wins immunity!
 * SURVIVORS READY? GO!
 * Once the votes are read, the decision is final; the person voted out will be asked to leave the Tribal Council area immediately. I'll read the votes...
 * 10th person voted out and the 2nd member of our jury...
 * Alfons, the tribe has spoken; it's time for you to go.
 * As for the rest of you, there are 12 days left in this game, and it's clear that no one is ever safe.
 * Grab your torches and head back to camp. Good night.